Worn Thin
This is a new medium for me. Feel free to tell me what does not work. WIDWorn ThinShe snoozes in her favorite chair.The cats are snuggled in her lap.Her curves are full of shape but are not...
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Well old age will come to us all -that is something we can be certain of.However, we dont have to take it lying down...At least cats, like children and old memories, accept us for what we are,...
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I found this very sad, Wayne -- particularly the way she's been described ... because for all the beautiful things that are lost with age ... there are so many truly beautiful things gained. (Maybe...
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enjoyed your poem WID...I think however less "The's" would make for a smoother read..eg..She snoozes in her favorite chair.cats snuggled in her lap....Just a suggestion from someone who adores...
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WID: hmmmmmmm... technically, only this line feels totally uncomfortable:"Her curves are full of shape but are not shapely."---curves and shape/shapely pretty much saying the same thing...I guess it...
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I don't mean to put a damper on anyone's enthusiasm or to be the "bad guy" (which I notoriously am! ) around here, but we all need to remember the intent of this particular forum here at the...
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sorry Beth...alice with tail between legs... To be a poet is no great thing, a lone bird at dawn will always say it better...:)
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Hey!! No tail between the legs, young lady! *tries out her best mean look* How's this one? Pretty good?Alice, I'm not trying to be a bad guy or to admonish anyone in any way ... just trying to...
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To All,I take full responsibility and apologize. I appreciate the comments made. They were what I was looking for. The 'maveric' in me got the best of me. Thanks, Beth, for the clarification of what...
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No apologies necessary, Wayne. I'm always the party pooper! No wonder no one takes me out on Friday night, huh? Anyone can write of beauty -- of life, friendship, love everlasting -- but it is those...
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